Advice? - Rape Board

Raper of Anime · 07-06-2007, 08:04 PM

I have been trying for the past few weeks to write a sex scene between two males without success. I can't decide in what order to write my sentences in a way they'll make sense and at the same time captivate readers. Also, I think I make the characters too soft when they shouldn't be.

Any advice?

MADDOGMCMANAMAN · 07-06-2007, 08:50 PM

dont do it !!

Raper of Anime · 07-06-2007, 09:16 PM

Why? Gay sex turns me on and my friends like reading stuff like that.

07-06-2007, 10:42 PM

How about this for a start? Imagine you're not writing a fictional story, Raper..... Instead, there is someone you're talking with and you are telling him or her this story. Relate the events and what was said to this person exactly the way you would tell it for real. You can always go back through it all later to fill out more detail, add more dialogue, clean up the grammar, and so on.

If that approach doesn't work for you, then think of someone you know in real life who is interesting -- then just imagine that person is telling you this story... and write it down the way you "hear" it being told in your mind.

GOATBOY · 07-07-2007, 08:05 PM

write what you like. just don't make me read it.

there has to be at least one boob mentioned in it or i will not care

MADDOGMCMANAMAN · 07-07-2007, 08:35 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by GOATBOY

write what you like. just don't make me read it.

there has to be at least one boob mentioned in it or i will not care

just one at least PLEASE !!!!!!!!!!

07-07-2007, 08:54 PM

Uh, guys... those usually come in pairs.

MADDOGMCMANAMAN · 07-07-2007, 08:58 PM

sssssshhhhh sephy !!!! u revealing the plan !!

Wicked · 07-07-2007, 09:02 PM

I thought they came in threes!

GOATBOY · 07-08-2007, 04:39 AM

wow, 3 more and you could milk her

RapeU · 07-08-2007, 10:22 PM

This is my process for writing a story:

1 - Inspiration

When I am inspired to write a story, I type without stopping until I am interrupted by something or go to bed. Inspiration can come from anywhere at anytime and cannot be forced.

2 - editing

After taking a long break from the story, I edit it a little bit then read it out loud. If you can't read it out loud, pretend it's something you are reading for the first time.

3 - Posting

I post incomplete stories. What I mean by that is the story I have posted does not have an ending or a middle. Posting my incomplete stories inspires me more to work at them because people are reading it and they want more. For example, I never planned The Hunter to become part of a Trilogy. I never even planned to get inspired to write that story from the rp.

So my advice to you is don't force it upon yourself to write the story. Let inspiration come to you and it will be completely awesome.

sillyjunior2000 · 07-10-2007, 02:11 PM

remind me not to read your stories !

07-06-2007, 08:04 PM	#1
Raper of Anime Member Join Date: May 2006 Posts: 47 Reputation: 10	Advice? I have been trying for the past few weeks to write a sex scene between two males without success. I can't decide in what order to write my sentences in a way they'll make sense and at the same time captivate readers. Also, I think I make the characters too soft when they shouldn't be. Any advice?

07-06-2007, 08:50 PM	#2
MADDOGMCMANAMAN PUSSYCRUSHER Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: YOUR MOMMAS HOUSE Posts: 2,161 Reputation: 9875	dont do it !! __________________ The Original PUSSYCRUSHER !!

07-07-2007, 08:05 PM	#5
GOATBOY Privileged Member Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: london uk Posts: 627 Reputation: 4793	write what you like. just don't make me read it. there has to be at least one boob mentioned in it or i will not care __________________ HAPPINESS IS A DRY PUSSY

07-07-2007, 08:58 PM	#8
MADDOGMCMANAMAN PUSSYCRUSHER Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: YOUR MOMMAS HOUSE Posts: 2,161 Reputation: 9875	sssssshhhhh sephy !!!! u revealing the plan !! __________________ The Original PUSSYCRUSHER !!

07-08-2007, 04:39 AM	#10
GOATBOY Privileged Member Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: london uk Posts: 627 Reputation: 4793	wow, 3 more and you could milk her __________________ HAPPINESS IS A DRY PUSSY

07-06-2007, 09:16 PM	#3
Raper of Anime Member Join Date: May 2006 Posts: 47 Reputation: 10	Why? Gay sex turns me on and my friends like reading stuff like that.

07-06-2007, 10:42 PM	#4
Sephy Guest Posts: n/a	How about this for a start? Imagine you're not writing a fictional story, Raper..... Instead, there is someone you're talking with and you are telling him or her this story. Relate the events and what was said to this person exactly the way you would tell it for real. You can always go back through it all later to fill out more detail, add more dialogue, clean up the grammar, and so on. If that approach doesn't work for you, then think of someone you know in real life who is interesting -- then just imagine that person is telling you this story... and write it down the way you "hear" it being told in your mind.

07-07-2007, 08:54 PM	#7
Sephy Guest Posts: n/a	Uh, guys... those usually come in pairs.

07-08-2007, 10:22 PM	#11
RapeU Yes = No. No = Yes Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: Texas Posts: 2,412 Reputation: 33359	This is my process for writing a story: 1 - Inspiration When I am inspired to write a story, I type without stopping until I am interrupted by something or go to bed. Inspiration can come from anywhere at anytime and cannot be forced. 2 - editing After taking a long break from the story, I edit it a little bit then read it out loud. If you can't read it out loud, pretend it's something you are reading for the first time. 3 - Posting I post incomplete stories. What I mean by that is the story I have posted does not have an ending or a middle. Posting my incomplete stories inspires me more to work at them because people are reading it and they want more. For example, I never planned The Hunter to become part of a Trilogy. I never even planned to get inspired to write that story from the rp. So my advice to you is don't force it upon yourself to write the story. Let inspiration come to you and it will be completely awesome. __________________ Stories I have written. The Red Rose Rapist short stories Roses Are Red, Violets Are Blue, Sugar Is Sweet, The Rapist Is You!? The Kidnapping Chronicles The Hunter, Huntress, LK, The Masked Marauder, Melinda's Tale, and The Masked Marauder II - Allen's Revenge Other Stories At My Cousin's Wedding Last edited by RapeU; 07-09-2007 at 10:09 AM.

07-10-2007, 02:11 PM	#12
sillyjunior2000 Privileged Member Join Date: Apr 2007 Posts: 238 Reputation: 174	remind me not to read your stories ! __________________ how do you do? - we usually remove our clothes and do.