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08-26-2007, 09:38 AM | #1 | |
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Story/Role Play Review Club
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08-26-2007, 01:18 PM | #2 |
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I'm in, this is a great way to get feedback and reward for the effort some of us put into roleplays and stories
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08-26-2007, 10:59 PM | #3 |
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I like the idea. I would welcome it the feedback. I have rp's but no stories though.
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08-26-2007, 11:51 PM | #4 | |
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08-26-2007, 11:52 PM | #5 |
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I'm in!
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08-26-2007, 11:56 PM | #6 | |
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08-27-2007, 12:03 AM | #7 |
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id like to be in if thats possible ..
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08-27-2007, 12:06 AM | #8 | |
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08-27-2007, 02:07 AM | #9 |
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well sounds good then
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08-27-2007, 10:25 PM | #10 |
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08-28-2007, 04:28 PM | #11 |
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Is it possible to get a stickey, for this thread?
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08-28-2007, 04:43 PM | #12 |
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Here's my first comment: What happened to the test? I was reading the story in eager anticipation of learning what the test was and if she would pass it, and if she did would he be true to his word. The story itself is well written and very descriptive. It is from the females point of view, which is my preference to read, but I'm still disapointed in the lack of closeure.
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08-28-2007, 04:57 PM | #13 |
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can i join?
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08-28-2007, 05:29 PM | #14 |
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Sure it's open to everyone, just read "Total Control" and post any comments/reviews.
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08-30-2007, 11:26 PM | #15 |
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I thought it was a great story!!! Got me VERY hot!
Only, I understood that she was blindfolded, but felt a little “jipped”, as a reader when she said "He uses his hand to cover my eyes and walks me to an unknown destination." I wanted a visual :-( Other than that minor complaint, I enjoyed it very much! A couple of my favorite lines from it are, "Keep your eyes open, I want you to look at me" and "I am disappointed, but whether it's from knowing there is more to come or from fearing that it's over I dare not guess." I thought it was excellent writing!!! |
08-31-2007, 04:38 PM | #16 |
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I'm in.
I remember feeling somewhat disappointed at the end of Total Control because the ending feels a little rushed, like there could have been more added to it. I still loved the story and it had a good plot with hot, descriptive actions and events.
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Stories I have written. The Red Rose Rapist short stories Roses Are Red, Violets Are Blue, Sugar Is Sweet, The Rapist Is You!? The Kidnapping Chronicles The Hunter, Huntress, LK, The Masked Marauder, Melinda's Tale, and The Masked Marauder II - Allen's Revenge Other Stories At My Cousin's Wedding |
09-03-2007, 08:44 AM | #17 |
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We're going to move on to the next story/roleplay I've asked SecretObsession to select the next one.
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09-04-2007, 05:41 PM | #18 |
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Next story is
Ultimate Adventure Club by Intheshadows http://www.rapeboard.com/showthread....1580#post91580 |
09-05-2007, 12:31 PM | #19 |
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Sorry I'm late with the Total Control review.
This one has very good writing and stood out from the stories I was flicking through to select. I don't normally like any story where the victim ends up enjoying her rape but the interesting plot and repeated frustration at missing opportunities to escape adds some realism. My only complaint would be that there is no description of the rapist at all, but in this case it seems to work because of the mystery surrounding him. Looking forward to the ending.
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09-05-2007, 01:29 PM | #20 |
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The thing I´ve enjoyed most is that story is written by two narrators (Jack and Christy), which is very original.
The end is very good (I won´t tell it). I like what happens to Christy and Christy´s boss. A very original and surprising story. Must read.
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