Story Reviews and Opinions - Rape Board

Sternenlied · 06-26-2007, 03:56 AM

This thread is supposed to be similar to the "Movie Reviews and Opinions".

I thought to help our members and visitors sort through the huge amount of stories availabe you could state your opinions about stories in here to recommend the ones you liked and think others should enjoy as well!

So please people, give members and guests your opinions and show them what wonderful things are to be discovered in this section!

sindyloo · 06-29-2007, 12:32 PM

Great idea Stern!! authors really do need input from their readers wether it is good or bad! Very smart to start this thread...THANK YOU!!

sillyjunior2000 · 06-29-2007, 12:58 PM

Review: "Blackmailed Mother"
Author: sindyloo
This one never gives any hint upon how it all started. It just begins with the narration from the mother's perspective. And everything's been so cleverly cooked up that the reader soon doesnt care about the incest involved but is more interested in the proceedings.
Whats more, the author promises a different and nice ending

*more review description as the story proceeds*

Wendel · 08-30-2007, 05:44 PM

Review: "Blackmailed Mother"
Author: sindyloo

While not a big fan of the "slow warm-up" I must agree with sillyjunior2000. You get the feeling that some part has been cut and you want to look for it. Some stories can just jump right into the action, however this one would have benefited from some buildup.

A complement if you think about it, because it means we care about the protagonist.

misterbirdie · 10-11-2007, 03:22 PM

i dont mean to humilate anyone or make other people think i am a know it all. my criticism to most of the stories here is that "most of them make me click the back button before i finish the first pharagraph". here are some points where i think some stories put a drag

1. when they write like they are making a diary.
2. unconvincing character dialogues
3. uncreative and inrealistic plots
4. when they tend to make a very very very long story introduction

the way i find it appealing is when

1. when authors dont give an idea if its a fantasy or something based in real life.
2. more on graphic detailing and less cheesy "dialougues"

stella · 01-15-2008, 11:59 AM

This is just the best rape story I have ever read. It is so belivable and I can totally relate to what the caracter is feeling. The kidnapper goes from gentle to rough and completely blows my mind. The story is very unpredictable, it reaches new hights every time. The best part about it is, it's not even finished yet. Can't wait for the conclusion.

06-26-2007, 03:56 AM	#1
Sternenlied Unknown Entity Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Niflheim Posts: 2,427 Reputation: 77819	Story Reviews and Opinions This thread is supposed to be similar to the "Movie Reviews and Opinions". I thought to help our members and visitors sort through the huge amount of stories availabe you could state your opinions about stories in here to recommend the ones you liked and think others should enjoy as well! So please people, give members and guests your opinions and show them what wonderful things are to be discovered in this section! __________________ The Life and Death of Sam Crow - How the Sons of Anarchy lost their way

06-29-2007, 12:32 PM	#2
sindyloo Privileged Member Join Date: Nov 2006 Posts: 2,178 Reputation: 34844	Wonderful!! Great idea Stern!! authors really do need input from their readers wether it is good or bad! Very smart to start this thread...THANK YOU!! __________________ Tommy Loy, the cabin boy, The dirty little nipper, He filled his ass With broken glass And cirumcized the skipper!

06-29-2007, 12:58 PM	#3
sillyjunior2000 Privileged Member Join Date: Apr 2007 Posts: 238 Reputation: 174	Review: "Blackmailed Mother" Author: sindyloo This one never gives any hint upon how it all started. It just begins with the narration from the mother's perspective. And everything's been so cleverly cooked up that the reader soon doesnt care about the incest involved but is more interested in the proceedings. Whats more, the author promises a different and nice ending more review description as the story proceeds __________________ how do you do? - we usually remove our clothes and do.

10-11-2007, 03:22 PM	#5
misterbirdie Member Join Date: Jan 2007 Posts: 50 Reputation: 10	i dont mean to humilate anyone or make other people think i am a know it all. my criticism to most of the stories here is that "most of them make me click the back button before i finish the first pharagraph". here are some points where i think some stories put a drag 1. when they write like they are making a diary. 2. unconvincing character dialogues 3. uncreative and inrealistic plots 4. when they tend to make a very very very long story introduction the way i find it appealing is when 1. when authors dont give an idea if its a fantasy or something based in real life. 2. more on graphic detailing and less cheesy "dialougues" __________________ Rape is power

01-15-2008, 11:59 AM	#6
stella Junior Member Join Date: Jan 2008 Posts: 4 Reputation: 10	Rewiew: Total Control This is just the best rape story I have ever read. It is so belivable and I can totally relate to what the caracter is feeling. The kidnapper goes from gentle to rough and completely blows my mind. The story is very unpredictable, it reaches new hights every time. The best part about it is, it's not even finished yet. Can't wait for the conclusion.

08-30-2007, 05:44 PM	#4
Wendel Privileged Member Join Date: Mar 2007 Posts: 279 Reputation: 3443	Review: "Blackmailed Mother" Author: sindyloo While not a big fan of the "slow warm-up" I must agree with sillyjunior2000. You get the feeling that some part has been cut and you want to look for it. Some stories can just jump right into the action, however this one would have benefited from some buildup. A complement if you think about it, because it means we care about the protagonist.