Girl Hunters, author questions - Rape Board

sirthumper · 06-12-2006, 02:17 PM

So far I've completed the brief prologue I posted here, as well as three of four rather rough chapters.

Should I post each chapter as I finish it, or wait 'til the whole thing is finished? The story so far is pretty long. The prologue is only 400 words out of the 6000+ I've written so far. :-)

Also, should I mention the age of the victims in my story, or continue with generalities such as "young" and "teenaged," and let the reader decide in his/her own mind how old they want her to be?

Just wondering.

Thanks for reading, and have a super day!

JM

gal4 · 06-12-2006, 04:29 PM

You sound like the kind of a guy who would kidnap me, strip me down, after beating the krap out me, and you got this magic wand, and pushe it down on my nookie, making me come to brink of orgasm, and saying, is this good, huh, want some more, huh, is this good, and here I am screaming through my gag, my bleeding nose, and you are just asking, is it good, is it good?

Yeah, like my daddy, when he was rushing me to the hospital, and my belly felt like it was gonna bust with my baby, and he kept asking, does it hurt, does it hurt.

Sir, with due respect, I love your stories, hear me, I LOVE YOUR STORIES, now continue, and please release me from bondage.

somedude · 06-12-2006, 04:37 PM

Vague on character ages would be best my friend. Also posting it a chapter at a time would a good idea. Take it from a professional writer, you have the readers interested and you want to keep them interested!

sirthumper · 06-13-2006, 02:05 AM

Gal4, now now, don't get carried away. This is my only story so far, so be patient. I'll post another part in a day or two.

I'll post a chapter at a time, every few days.

Sir

Grm · 06-13-2006, 04:59 AM

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Originally Posted by sirthumper

So far I've completed the brief prologue I posted here, as well as three of four rather rough chapters.

Should I post each chapter as I finish it, or wait 'til the whole thing is finished? The story so far is pretty long. The prologue is only 400 words out of the 6000+ I've written so far. :-)

Also, should I mention the age of the victims in my story, or continue with generalities such as "young" and "teenaged," and let the reader decide in his/her own mind how old they want her to be?

Just wondering.

Thanks for reading, and have a super day!

JM

The age limit for stories 14+
Grm

gal4 · 06-13-2006, 06:33 AM

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Originally Posted by sirthumper

Gal4, now now, don't get carried away. This is my only story so far, so be patient. I'll post another part in a day or two.

I'll post a chapter at a time, every few days.

Sir

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I LOVE TO RAPE · 08-11-2006, 01:28 PM

yes tell us the age make the guy old my age is 53 and the girl from 14 to 17

dman · 08-11-2006, 06:03 PM

please post each chapter as there done

06-12-2006, 02:17 PM	#1
sirthumper Junior Member Join Date: Jun 2006 Posts: 20 Reputation: 10	Girl Hunters, author questions So far I've completed the brief prologue I posted here, as well as three of four rather rough chapters. Should I post each chapter as I finish it, or wait 'til the whole thing is finished? The story so far is pretty long. The prologue is only 400 words out of the 6000+ I've written so far. :-) Also, should I mention the age of the victims in my story, or continue with generalities such as "young" and "teenaged," and let the reader decide in his/her own mind how old they want her to be? Just wondering. Thanks for reading, and have a super day! JM

06-12-2006, 04:37 PM	#3
somedude W.I.R. and Marshal Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: Way out West!!!! Posts: 8,566 Reputation: 124981	Vague on character ages would be best my friend. Also posting it a chapter at a time would a good idea. Take it from a professional writer, you have the readers interested and you want to keep them interested! __________________ I'm a pervert and proud of it!

06-12-2006, 04:29 PM	#2
gal4 UnWanted Trick Baby Join Date: Dec 2005 Posts: 834 Reputation: 584	You sound like the kind of a guy who would kidnap me, strip me down, after beating the krap out me, and you got this magic wand, and pushe it down on my nookie, making me come to brink of orgasm, and saying, is this good, huh, want some more, huh, is this good, and here I am screaming through my gag, my bleeding nose, and you are just asking, is it good, is it good? Yeah, like my daddy, when he was rushing me to the hospital, and my belly felt like it was gonna bust with my baby, and he kept asking, does it hurt, does it hurt. Sir, with due respect, I love your stories, hear me, I LOVE YOUR STORIES, now continue, and please release me from bondage.

06-13-2006, 02:05 AM	#4
sirthumper Junior Member Join Date: Jun 2006 Posts: 20 Reputation: 10	Gal4, now now, don't get carried away. This is my only story so far, so be patient. I'll post another part in a day or two. I'll post a chapter at a time, every few days. Sir

08-11-2006, 01:28 PM	#7
I LOVE TO RAPE Banned Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: IRVING TEXAS Posts: 8 Reputation: 10	yes tell us the age make the guy old my age is 53 and the girl from 14 to 17

08-11-2006, 06:03 PM	#8
dman Member Join Date: Jan 2006 Posts: 77 Reputation: 67	please post each chapter as there done