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Old 10-10-2009, 05:06 PM   #21
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Your story is very good, 5 stars!!! The epilogue of the characters is a cool touch---Write On----April
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Old 10-11-2009, 01:54 PM   #22
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Your story is very good, 5 stars!!! The epilogue of the characters is a cool touch---Write On----April

Thanks April. Thank you for rating it and yeah the epilogue was interesting.
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Old 10-12-2009, 05:37 AM   #23
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Thank you for your suggestions and advise, Pete. I have been using capitals as if to emphasis something, without realizing that it is grammatically wrong to misuse Capital letters unnecessarily.
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Thank you Flesh4Fantasy for your suggestions and analysis. Yes, I have been practicing a bit but I was too lazy to get off. I have to thank sternenlied for making me get off my lazy butt and start writing, as I wanted a bit of practice before the contest.

Your rule of thumb is an excellent and valuable suggestion. Thank you.
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Thank you Fae. Wow I did not know that you are an artist. Thank you for the quick sketch of Sarah, you drew and sent me.


I am glad you liked the story. Yes, It is true that the rape could have been more descriptive. I guess I am still not comfortable writing about sex.

I will keep your advise in mind when I write my next story.
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Old 10-12-2009, 08:53 PM   #24
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Have just read your first attempt at writing and I was really quite impressed. Keep up the good work, you will get better with practice. Maybe you could illustrate the story with still photos from the Bride Rape series? Some great advice there from other members.
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Old 10-13-2009, 06:52 AM   #25
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hey knight ... your story is very well crafted ..i am very impressed with what you have written so far are are going to be a very gifted writter ...

and for the fantastic story +rep for you friend
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no bad good first story keep up the good work
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Old 10-17-2009, 01:13 AM   #28
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Nice ending buddy,loved it.
I completely agree with this statement! The addition of a epilogue to the story is a nice touch that isn't done by many often enough.
Sarah was the name of an X of mine so the name sat well with me.If anyone deserved it....Well,you get the idea.
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I am glad you liked it.
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