Violation of Elizabeth - Rape Board

Grm · 08-29-2006, 04:50 PM

Violation of Elizabeth

What becomes of you?
now your body is no longer yours
they are now who you belong to
already taken on all fours.

Screaming will do no good,
their organs are now alive
deep invasion now understood,
even as you struggle and writhe.

Please no! you gasp and cry,
even as those violations accrue,
each time a bit of you will die,
drowning in slime that is due.

Weeping and moaning in the aftermath,
your spirit almost broken and crushed,
dreaming of afterlife may be the only path,
the cold green depths now leave you hushed.

Sternenlied · 08-29-2006, 04:54 PM

Great!

Thanks for sharing! I really like it!

Sodoman · 08-29-2006, 05:30 PM

Veeeeerrry Interesting! Nice poem!

prey4me · 09-02-2006, 11:46 PM

Nice....very evocative.

(BTW...you might wanna edit verse three, line three....)

08-29-2006, 04:50 PM	#1
Grm Banned Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: The Black Country Posts: 956 Reputation: 1332	Violation of Elizabeth Violation of Elizabeth What becomes of you? now your body is no longer yours they are now who you belong to already taken on all fours. Screaming will do no good, their organs are now alive deep invasion now understood, even as you struggle and writhe. Please no! you gasp and cry, even as those violations accrue, each time a bit of you will die, drowning in slime that is due. Weeping and moaning in the aftermath, your spirit almost broken and crushed, dreaming of afterlife may be the only path, the cold green depths now leave you hushed.

08-29-2006, 04:54 PM	#2
Sternenlied Unknown Entity Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Niflheim Posts: 2,427 Reputation: 77819	Great! Thanks for sharing! I really like it! __________________ The Life and Death of Sam Crow - How the Sons of Anarchy lost their way

08-29-2006, 05:30 PM	#3
Sodoman Backdoor Bandit Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: U.S. Posts: 2,144 Reputation: 28425	Veeeeerrry Interesting! Nice poem! __________________ "The mind is a beautiful thing to fuck."

09-02-2006, 11:46 PM	#4
prey4me Privileged Member Join Date: Dec 2005 Posts: 482 Reputation: 5552	Nice....very evocative. (BTW...you might wanna edit verse three, line three....)