Story/Role Play Review Club - Rape Board

Intheshadows · 08-26-2007, 09:38 AM

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Originally Posted by Intheshadows

I have another idea along these lines, we could have a "story/role play" club, kinda like a book club. A member of the club(anyone can join)
picks a story or roleplay that is on this board and all the of the club read it and then discuss it. We would rotate throught the club members so that everyone would have a chance to choose.

I would still like to start this, but would hope to have at least four memebers that would initially participate. Any Interest?

Rogue · 08-26-2007, 01:18 PM

I'm in, this is a great way to get feedback and reward for the effort some of us put into roleplays and stories

Jasmine · 08-26-2007, 10:59 PM

I like the idea. I would welcome it the feedback. I have rp's but no stories though.

Intheshadows · 08-26-2007, 11:51 PM

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Originally Posted by Jasmine

I like the idea. I would welcome it the feedback. I have rp's but no stories though.

Actually, you or any other member need not to have written a story or been in a role play to participate. All you need to do is be willing to read the stories/rp's and discuss them.

SecretObsession · 08-26-2007, 11:52 PM

I'm in!

Intheshadows · 08-26-2007, 11:56 PM

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Originally Posted by SecretObsession

I'm in!

Excellent! That's makes at least four of us, I will ask Rogue to pick the first story or rp as she was the first to reply.

ishkara · 08-27-2007, 12:03 AM

id like to be in if thats possible ..

Intheshadows · 08-27-2007, 12:06 AM

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Originally Posted by ishkara

id like to be in if thats possible ..

Of course your in, there's not a limit to membership.

ishkara · 08-27-2007, 02:07 AM

well sounds good then

Rogue · 08-27-2007, 10:25 PM

Ok, I pick "Total Control" by victim4u

http://www.rapeboard.com/showthread.php?t=3594

Intheshadows · 08-28-2007, 04:28 PM

Is it possible to get a stickey, for this thread?

Intheshadows · 08-28-2007, 04:43 PM

Here's my first comment: What happened to the test? I was reading the story in eager anticipation of learning what the test was and if she would pass it, and if she did would he be true to his word. The story itself is well written and very descriptive. It is from the females point of view, which is my preference to read, but I'm still disapointed in the lack of closeure.

reaper2555 · 08-28-2007, 04:57 PM

can i join?

Intheshadows · 08-28-2007, 05:29 PM

Sure it's open to everyone, just read "Total Control" and post any comments/reviews.

SecretObsession · 08-30-2007, 11:26 PM

I thought it was a great story!!! Got me VERY hot!

Only, I understood that she was blindfolded, but felt a little “jipped”, as a reader when she said "He uses his hand to cover my eyes and walks me to an unknown destination." I wanted a visual :-(
Other than that minor complaint, I enjoyed it very much!

A couple of my favorite lines from it are, "Keep your eyes open, I want you to look at me" and "I am disappointed, but whether it's from knowing there is more to come or from fearing that it's over I dare not guess."

I thought it was excellent writing!!!

RapeU · 08-31-2007, 04:38 PM

I'm in.

I remember feeling somewhat disappointed at the end of Total Control because the ending feels a little rushed, like there could have been more added to it. I still loved the story and it had a good plot with hot, descriptive actions and events.

Intheshadows · 09-03-2007, 08:44 AM

We're going to move on to the next story/roleplay I've asked SecretObsession to select the next one.

SecretObsession · 09-04-2007, 05:41 PM

Next story is
Ultimate Adventure Club by Intheshadows

http://www.rapeboard.com/showthread....1580#post91580

Rogue · 09-05-2007, 12:31 PM

Sorry I'm late with the Total Control review.

This one has very good writing and stood out from the stories I was flicking through to select. I don't normally like any story where the victim ends up enjoying her rape but the interesting plot and repeated frustration at missing opportunities to escape adds some realism. My only complaint would be that there is no description of the rapist at all, but in this case it seems to work because of the mystery surrounding him. Looking forward to the ending.

Beardy · 09-05-2007, 01:29 PM

The thing IÂ´ve enjoyed most is that story is written by two narrators (Jack and Christy), which is very original.
The end is very good (I wonÂ´t tell it). I like what happens to Christy and ChristyÂ´s boss.
A very original and surprising story.
Must read.

08-26-2007, 01:18 PM	#2
Rogue Immoral Irishman Join Date: Nov 2005 Posts: 1,344 Reputation: 20982	I'm in, this is a great way to get feedback and reward for the effort some of us put into roleplays and stories __________________ â€œBefore you criticize a woman, you should walk a mile in her shoes. That way, when you criticize her, you are a mile away and you have her shoes.â€

08-27-2007, 10:25 PM	#10
Rogue Immoral Irishman Join Date: Nov 2005 Posts: 1,344 Reputation: 20982	Ok, I pick "Total Control" by victim4u http://www.rapeboard.com/showthread.php?t=3594 __________________ â€œBefore you criticize a woman, you should walk a mile in her shoes. That way, when you criticize her, you are a mile away and you have her shoes.â€

08-31-2007, 04:38 PM	#16
RapeU Yes = No. No = Yes Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: Texas Posts: 2,412 Reputation: 33359	I'm in. I remember feeling somewhat disappointed at the end of Total Control because the ending feels a little rushed, like there could have been more added to it. I still loved the story and it had a good plot with hot, descriptive actions and events. __________________ Stories I have written. The Red Rose Rapist short stories Roses Are Red, Violets Are Blue, Sugar Is Sweet, The Rapist Is You!? The Kidnapping Chronicles The Hunter, Huntress, LK, The Masked Marauder, Melinda's Tale, and The Masked Marauder II - Allen's Revenge Other Stories At My Cousin's Wedding

09-05-2007, 12:31 PM	#19
Rogue Immoral Irishman Join Date: Nov 2005 Posts: 1,344 Reputation: 20982	Sorry I'm late with the Total Control review. This one has very good writing and stood out from the stories I was flicking through to select. I don't normally like any story where the victim ends up enjoying her rape but the interesting plot and repeated frustration at missing opportunities to escape adds some realism. My only complaint would be that there is no description of the rapist at all, but in this case it seems to work because of the mystery surrounding him. Looking forward to the ending. __________________ â€œBefore you criticize a woman, you should walk a mile in her shoes. That way, when you criticize her, you are a mile away and you have her shoes.â€

09-05-2007, 01:29 PM	#20
Beardy Dark alley walker Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Europe Posts: 1,210 Reputation: 22589	The thing IÂ´ve enjoyed most is that story is written by two narrators (Jack and Christy), which is very original. The end is very good (I wonÂ´t tell it). I like what happens to Christy and ChristyÂ´s boss. A very original and surprising story. Must read. __________________ Meet me in your dark dreams.

08-26-2007, 10:59 PM	#3
Jasmine Privileged Member Join Date: Jul 2006 Posts: 2,352 Reputation: 20045	I like the idea. I would welcome it the feedback. I have rp's but no stories though.

08-26-2007, 11:52 PM	#5
SecretObsession Passion's Playtoy Join Date: Aug 2007 Posts: 1,591 Reputation: 11692	I'm in!

08-27-2007, 12:03 AM	#7
ishkara Member Join Date: Aug 2007 Posts: 70 Reputation: 73	id like to be in if thats possible ..

08-27-2007, 02:07 AM	#9
ishkara Member Join Date: Aug 2007 Posts: 70 Reputation: 73	well sounds good then

08-28-2007, 04:28 PM	#11
Intheshadows Privileged Member Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: Texas Posts: 1,743 Reputation: 642	Is it possible to get a stickey, for this thread?

08-28-2007, 04:43 PM	#12
Intheshadows Privileged Member Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: Texas Posts: 1,743 Reputation: 642	Here's my first comment: What happened to the test? I was reading the story in eager anticipation of learning what the test was and if she would pass it, and if she did would he be true to his word. The story itself is well written and very descriptive. It is from the females point of view, which is my preference to read, but I'm still disapointed in the lack of closeure.

08-28-2007, 04:57 PM	#13
reaper2555 Junior Member Join Date: Aug 2007 Posts: 12 Reputation: 10	can i join?

08-28-2007, 05:29 PM	#14
Intheshadows Privileged Member Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: Texas Posts: 1,743 Reputation: 642	Sure it's open to everyone, just read "Total Control" and post any comments/reviews.

08-30-2007, 11:26 PM	#15
SecretObsession Passion's Playtoy Join Date: Aug 2007 Posts: 1,591 Reputation: 11692	I thought it was a great story!!! Got me VERY hot! Only, I understood that she was blindfolded, but felt a little “jipped”, as a reader when she said "He uses his hand to cover my eyes and walks me to an unknown destination." I wanted a visual :-( Other than that minor complaint, I enjoyed it very much! A couple of my favorite lines from it are, "Keep your eyes open, I want you to look at me" and "I am disappointed, but whether it's from knowing there is more to come or from fearing that it's over I dare not guess." I thought it was excellent writing!!!

09-03-2007, 08:44 AM	#17
Intheshadows Privileged Member Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: Texas Posts: 1,743 Reputation: 642	We're going to move on to the next story/roleplay I've asked SecretObsession to select the next one.

09-04-2007, 05:41 PM	#18
SecretObsession Passion's Playtoy Join Date: Aug 2007 Posts: 1,591 Reputation: 11692	Next story is Ultimate Adventure Club by Intheshadows http://www.rapeboard.com/showthread....1580#post91580