That's very interesting, fistingbot. Actually although I'd posted only the beginning of the story, I had a clear plan and have written enough to post part 2. However, I like your ideas and I could write them up as an alternative continuation, perhaps with names and a few other details changed. Let me know if you'd like that and I could send you installments for your comments and ideas.
Part of the reason for posting a fairly short introduction was because I could see there were various strands and clues that could lead in different directions, all to Rachel getting well and truly raped, of course!
Believe me, Rachel will be violated and humiliated!
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