Your writing is beautiful! If I supply ideas you like, can you please write them out? I really want to read about her being violated and humiliated in your words.
Hayley isn't the first girl in town to go missing, in fact, there's been quite a few the past several decades, and even some from nearby villages. While Mr. Fletcher was once in trouble with the law, he's gotten smarter since that one time, and avoided capture thus far by means of a special agreement he has with the higher ups in the force as well as some of the more influential town members, including her rich fiance. Mr. Fletcher's house may appear modest from outside, but there's a cavernous dungeon built below where he hides his captives and many officers and other men about town come by to use them, regularly. When Rachel arrives, the house is empty, but she hears a yell and rushes down to the basement to find Mr Fletcher, Damien, and a couple other officers having their way with Hayley. They quickly capture Rachel and now have to decide what to do with her next...
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