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Originally Posted by Fae
I loved the set up. It was a great story, especially if it's your first one. I had only one wish: that the last few paragraphs before the epilogue were filled out more. The build up was great, the back story, and the description were wonderful. I loved the characters and there were a few moments in there I could see enough I could sketch them. I just wanted the end result to be drawn out and described more. Overall, I liked it a lot.
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Thank you Fae. Wow I did not know that you are an artist. Thank you for the quick sketch of Sarah, you drew and sent me.
I am glad you liked the story. Yes, It is true that the rape could have been more descriptive. I guess I am still not comfortable writing about sex.
I will keep your advise in mind when I write my next story.
