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Originally Posted by knightlover001

Thank you for your suggestions and advise, Pete. I have been using capitals as if to emphasis something, without realizing that it is grammatically wrong to misuse Capital letters unnecessarily.

Originally Posted by knightlover001

Thank you Flesh4Fantasy for your suggestions and analysis. Yes, I have been practicing a bit but I was too lazy to get off. I have to thank sternenlied for making me get off my lazy butt and start writing, as I wanted a bit of practice before the contest.

Your rule of thumb is an excellent and valuable suggestion. Thank you.

Originally Posted by knightlover001

Thanks buddy, You have been a great support for me in RB from the day I became a member. I value your friendship very much.

Originally Posted by knightlover001

Thank you kitty. Yes, English is not my native language but it is the one in which we have our education from our childhood, thanks to Lord Macaulay.

Originally Posted by knightlover001

Thank you Niki. I am glad you liked it. I was a bit nervous when I posted it but now I am glad that my friends like it.

Originally Posted by knightlover001

Thank you for your appreciation, buddy.

Originally Posted by knightlover001

Thank you Fae. Wow I did not know that you are an artist. Thank you for the quick sketch of Sarah, you drew and sent me.

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I am glad you liked the story. Yes, It is true that the rape could have been more descriptive. I guess I am still not comfortable writing about sex.

I will keep your advise in mind when I write my next story.

Originally Posted by knightlover001

Thank you buddy. I am happy that you liked the story. I will continue to write since it is good fun.

Originally Posted by knightlover001

Thank you Lance. I will write more buddy.

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