Sorry my posts are stretched out. Life ya know
I'll try and add the next part tomorrow night. And thank you all for the 2,500 views! It's very flattering.
Edit: To anyone who reads this, I have been struggling with issues of conscience over being on this forum. I have justified it with myself for a little while now, but I can't go on like this. Its dragging on my mind. So I am going to have my account deactified, if that is possible. I'm sorry, but I will no longer write any updates. Thank you for the now 3,000 views, I'm glad you've enjoyed my work, although I'm sorry that I wrote it...