[pervipete]

Thanks guys and girl...

I'm glad you liked it, and thanks for the rep.

As for the tone Flesh, it came from the charectors, mainly the relationship between the two siblings, and the fact that I didn't think Demi would be one of those to cum during the rape, or find any pleasure at all, and the fact that the rapist was full of rage that evening.

As for the way it ended, I would be very surprised if that wasn't the reaction, knowing that your actions put your sister through this, well, you would have to be downright evil not to react like that.