Well, the thing is, the actual story, the idea I mean, is good, but the fact that you don't know English that well is a problem, I mean, it's hard to enjoy the story if you have to look tru the typos and try to figure out what exactly did you mean.
Oh well, regardless, atleast your trying, I know how hard it is to actually try writting something in a differente language, English isn't my first language as well, so I feel you lol.
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