Thanks for a great adventure
Just found your story
Ill read it more thoroughly later but its great.
just the right balance of fear, brutality and foreboding
don't worry about the end
just give it an unexpected twist then bring all the strands together quickly at that point
dramatic finishes are better than just trailing away.
It takes a lot of time and effort to write stories of substance. W all love you for that.
you are a great mentor and writer
Elly
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