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Old 12-20-2011, 08:23 AM   #7
bobrob
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I loved the story, the concept, the hot soccer mom and the detail you used. The humiliation angle was great. My only problem is that it ended WAY to prematurely. Would they really leave without fully gang banging this woman right in front of her husband? They stated that was their intent. I was just wondering why you chose to end it where you did. I hope you reconsider and take it up where you left off!
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