Thanks pravjey, finman, and justmetoo for the kudos - and all very good feedback. I'm cutting my teeth as a writer and still learning. I definitely want to experiment more with getting into the head of the victim in future stories - makes it more personal as we can mirror what the vic's going through. I also enjoy playing with the objectification of the victim by the attackers who feel more embolden when they're within a group, like having one woman against a bunch of hungry wolves full of testosterone.
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