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Ahab · 04-02-2007, 07:31 PM

I like it, there is a lot of visual words and descriptions which always makes stories come alive no matter the subject. You said you knew better, but did it anyway, so I'm going to tell you. Don't discredit your work. You don't have to put a big disclaimer on it just in case someone doesn't like it. I think you should take that off there. Although explaining what it was about and giving the literary background was good.

The only gripe I have is that I KNOW you wrote this while you were at work, you are so going to get fired.

04-02-2007, 07:31 PM	#7
Ahab Member Join Date: Apr 2007 Posts: 32 Reputation: 34	I like it, there is a lot of visual words and descriptions which always makes stories come alive no matter the subject. You said you knew better, but did it anyway, so I'm going to tell you. Don't discredit your work. You don't have to put a big disclaimer on it just in case someone doesn't like it. I think you should take that off there. Although explaining what it was about and giving the literary background was good. The only gripe I have is that I KNOW you wrote this while you were at work, you are so going to get fired. Last edited by Ahab; 04-02-2007 at 07:38 PM.