Precious Moments
Story removed, sorry. Hope you enjoyed. I will not remove future stories.
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Almost 100 views and not a single comment or point towards my reputation? I guess that means I need to practice then, haha.
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I thought it was great! Got me nice and wet
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I really loved your story! It is amazingly well written, I think you have a great talent for words. To be honest, I think these kind of stories sound better in third person.
I don't think your story was too 'timid' I really liked the build up! Will you write more? :) |
Yep! I'm working on two stories right now. I'm glad you liked it, thanks for the comments, guys.
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