Whiners!!!

[somedude]

Here is a cowboy poem about whiners!!!

Whiners aint shiners!
Whiners aint even good diners!
Whiners, there's plenty of things that is finer!
Whiners get under your saddle!
Whiners aint even fun to battle!

Whiners suck donkey dong!
Whiners usually don't last for long!
Whiners aint winners!
Whiners don't make good sinners!
Whiners make me want to toss up my dinner!!!

Yeah I'm a shitty poet, but at least I aint whining!!!

[fireflights]

lol....nice one somedude

[tom8517]

thank you for your words
those that whine are truly turds
when they just complain
I wonder about their brain
I too ain't no poet
so now I shall just stow it

[innocent]

whine whine whine
well aint that fine
my time is mine
and to waste on you a crime.


poor but i dont often attempt this type of stuff!

[somedude]

Good ones PPM and Tom!:D

[innocent]

i miss the dark poetry section. nice one dude for starting up a new alternative.

[fireflights]

Bitch and moan
Go on have your groan
Piss and whine
Thats just fine
But if you really want to have that moan and groan
Just know that you are totally alone

ok gave it a shot :D

[innocent]

nice one firey!
we used to have a whole sticky thread for this type of thing. was amusing in a silly yet satisfying way.
not sure why its in rowdy room tho!

[somedude]

i miss the dark poetry section. nice one dude for starting up a new alternative.
Think of if as a tribute to Grm and a good harange of whiners!:D
Good one FF!!!

[fireflights]

Thanks SD and inno... lol

[tom8517]

Bitch and moan
Go on have your groan
Piss and whine
Thats just fine
But if you really want to have that moan and groan
Just know that you are totally alone

ok gave it a shot :D

Of course moaning and groaning are not always bad things FF, depends on the situation:D

[fireflights]

Never said that Tom... I find some moaning and groaning to be quite pleasurable :D

[shysnale]

Whine is fine but whiskey's quicker,
That empty bottle you fill with your tears,
Is a waste for my tastes.
The end is near for you my dear,
cause Love is not for me to pray.
Lady Death I'm begging you,
Lady Death I'm here for you.
Take that bitch under your dark wing,
The one in pain is not who you think.
Take a look at the blue blue sky,
Set me free from your bind of cries,
Life is more than a one way shout.

Yeah I stole the first line from Ozzy Osbourne

[somedude]

Not bad at all mon Frog!:D