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shiyuki
06-17-2009, 02:41 AM
I'm removing posts
Flesh4Fantasy
06-17-2009, 09:54 AM
Getting Better, Brother.

Nicer edit too - I know English is not your native language.

I held back the fifth star because...

Lara is so bendable and you did not take full advantage of that fact. :skull-big
Flesh4Fantasy
06-18-2009, 09:27 AM
Absolutely, Brother. No worries - I GOT everything from what you wrote.
:skull-roc:skull-bee:skull-roc